Review Detail of MrStealYourOnahole in Zenith: Last Revenant

so far I haven't seen any character development, but I'm only halfway through the novel as of writing this. The character design is well I don't know much if anything about the MC so that's that, but as I said earlier only half way through. But I had a idea that could help the author in making this, so I had to review early lest I forget it. my idea is an easy quick and (in my opinion) fun way to get ideas for the MC's abilities. Here is the link to a YouTube channel and for those of you who are squeamish about clicking links even safe ones (because YouTube links are safe) the channel is called Tier Zoo. https://***.youtube.com/channel/UCHsRtomD4twRf5WVHHk-cMw not sure if you can click on the link or even copy and paste it though.