Review Detail of R_G_AGARWAL in Zenith: Last Revenant

Item: Zenith: Last Revenant
Rating: 5

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i am a fan of original one so keep it up and yeah its better but dont make him a brute like original give him training of proper martial arts and instead of giving him some cosmic energy give him discovery of ki and magic as he already have earth's strongest body so give him ki and magic to experiment with for a few centuries and later he can go to other planets further strengthening his body without vunerability of kriptonite or something else and he can even essimilate all energies to himself making better energies. Anyway this is one of the best novel i have read so keep going these are just suggestions i would love to read alright .

Zenith: Last Revenant

Shaele

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ShaeleAuthorShaele

Adding Ki and mixing it with a hint of eastern lore could be fun, but before we get to that, there are so many awesome myths in DC's prehistoric storyline that we (the original author and myself) want to explore. The best stories in DC rest in the myths that most people skim through sadly.

3yr

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I had already gave him combat training later on in the novel, I dropped the novel befor i got to introduce his combat training under the Fasha people

3yr

heliumjaxLv13heliumjax

I already started to do that, could just continue it

Shaele:Adding Ki and mixing it with a hint of eastern lore could be fun, but before we get to that, there are so many awesome myths in DC's prehistoric storyline that we (the original author and myself) want to explore. The best stories in DC rest in the myths that most people skim through sadly.

3yr

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https://shrinke.me/EiABvc

3yr