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Disappointed. I thought he would make people better through training and tactics, using the system to help him see the strengths and weaknesses of people. What does he do the 1st time he has to lead a team? Just enhance their stats with the system to win, instead of using what was available to the fullest. I knew there would be smut, but instead of being impressed by his skills and seduced, the women are basically brainwashed by his charisma stat. A woman who had barely met him suddenly decide to become his little sl*t. The writing can be confusing due to language issues, and the fictional world lack descriptions.
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... Did we read the same story? The story is supposed to be about a coach that got a system tailored to make him a better coach (thus, improve others more than himself, duh). Not someone who got a system and decided to use it to become a coach (instead of something else).
Sajat_Toyi:You want the main character to use the system for people who have nothing to do with him? if I became the main character I would use the system to my heart's content, conquer the earth or become a villain
Tonyorobsky:... Did we read the same story? The story is supposed to be about a coach that got a system tailored to make him a better coach (thus, improve others more than himself, duh). Not someone who got a system and decided to use it to become a coach (instead of something else).