Review Detail of Fahrenx in The Dawn of the New World
Review detail
Sorry after reading the free chapters, this wasn't for me.. For those looking for critical reviews, this LN falls into the Destiny/fate/revenge/vengence tags and tropes. The events of the MC made him 1 dimentional, adding multiple personality disorders just made it messy.
The Dawn of the New World
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There is no revenge/vengeance plot even at the 1000th chapter so I'm quite curious how you found that so early on and out of nowhere. And I think this is the 4th time now I've had to say this but those are not multiple personalities, not even close. If you read even a little bit more that much would have become clear but since you're obviously misunderstanding a lot of the plot points I would say that's a moot point.
the fact that you had to respond 4 times to the same conclusion is the proof. the bipolar character, intended or not, is what readers perceive in the free chapters which are ment to hook an audience to pay more to continue. I will reread for specific points i had issue with at a later date.
shinigami8671:There is no revenge/vengeance plot even at the 1000th chapter so I'm quite curious how you found that so early on and out of nowhere. And I think this is the 4th time now I've had to say this but those are not multiple personalities, not even close. If you read even a little bit more that much would have become clear but since you're obviously misunderstanding a lot of the plot points I would say that's a moot point.
dear lord this is the one the MC gets brainwashed early and never gets his own identity. no thanks. Pushed and pulled, op vs trash but weak againt plot. this is not a fulfilling story. it's not even a story about the MC. he's a mouse in a maze and characters that get made up on the spot dictate the MC direction. how can a reader invest empathy or even understanding the MC when little bye-bye forget me powder is a plot point. makes transmigration pointless. decion making pointless.
Fahrenx:dear lord this is the one the MC gets brainwashed early and never gets his own identity. no thanks. Pushed and pulled, op vs trash but weak againt plot. this is not a fulfilling story. it's not even a story about the MC. he's a mouse in a maze and characters that get made up on the spot dictate the MC direction. how can a reader invest empathy or even understanding the MC when little bye-bye forget me powder is a plot point. makes transmigration pointless. decion making pointless.