This story is quite a disappointment, if there was a harem tag i wouldn't even bothered trying to read this. Beginning was somewhat promising, but after seeing that mc just comes to Gotham to watch Bruce's parents getting killed with stupid reasoning, I already understood that this will degrade to stupid harem fanfic and will be dropped by author as usual. Then i checked when last chapter was posted and surprise(no) it was 28 days ago, then after reading few reviews i understood that my assumption was correct and it will degrade to stupid harem with hypocritical, psychopath mc. In my opinion for example even with Bruce's parent alive mc could've shaped Bruce into Batman by showing him Gotham's true colors. And seeing Bruce who is not emotionally broken by his parents murder would be interesting. But mc have dumb reasoning and by reading reviews I know that he will continue to use that reasoning, so there is no point in continuing reading this.
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