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Nice story but kinda dull sometimes Just that make longer chapers and more DIALOGUES and INTERACTIONS with The Harem and other people on [1st person perspective] making it more lively and Lessen the timeskip it make the story unrealistic and hard to follow I'm even surprised he's already 17. You also need to put small details Like: The date like if it's Monday or is on Sunday or what time of the day he is in like is it morning?,night?,etcetc. Small details like that make the story more Realistic and add a little bit of Slice Of Life in it spend time with his ladies like he's having dialogues and interact with them on [1st Person perspective] and not just explaining things on [3rd person perspective] because it makes that part of the story dull and forgettable

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