It's a decent story overall. Could've been better but it's not shit either. The mc started off as a wimp but grew a spine later. Though in many places the plot feels too rushed. Also the romantic part is unrealistic as hell. The mc isn't shown to be manipulative enough to make a harem without substantial use of mind magic.
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