I overall liked your story, but there were some moments where I didn't like, but at the end, I am getting content for free, so I am in no place to complain, if possible I would like you to focus a bit more on supes mental powers but so far I am liking it. So here are some 5 stars to cheer you up and motivate you to write more good content for us.
Avi2112
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