First of all I like how the story is progressing so far and I hope you don't drop it. now the next thing is about the harem I honestly love harem and romance novels so I don't mind if you made a harem but you have to keep in mind that if you make a huge harem then the story would not go that well so keep it small or medium depends on you actually , next try to create a health relationship with the girls and not just them being dolls for sexual purpose (this would be hard but don't stress about it) , we don't mind if you did a few chapter on them also. Next superman has a lot of weakness like kryptonite ,magic, red sun etc you get it right, so try to have him build resistance against it if possible thank you [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp]
Avi2112
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LIKEIt's not every pretty girl type of thing ... it may seem that way now but there will be some who are just friends or just friends with benefits.
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Hope you are ok and fine , alot are waiting for new chapters, again hope you are ok and see you soon
Avi2112:Thank you!!image
umm... i dont know why you feel offended that I like harem you could have just minded your own business but noo you had to come and stick your bloody f****** ass , for all of us to see I mean its just a FanFiction man why do you have to come and bother me ,so what if I like harem i enjoy all types of gener shut the **** up and mind your own bussiness .
LackOfLovelife:r usome **** sick who lobe harem? lord have mercy with your lonely horny self.
you are a deprressed self centred ass hole who are you to judge what i like or do with my life and i enjoy what i do in my free time so go **** your self
LackOfLovelife:r usome **** sick who lobe harem? lord have mercy with your lonely horny self.