I like your fanfic. From the moment I started reading it, I finished it in one go and could only complain that there aren't enough chapters released yet. I like how sheacts and the way you created the character of Mio. So as for the stars 1. Writing quality: Perhaps it's because I'm bad at english but everything wasread well and there weren't any problems understanding what was written so good job on this part. 2. Updating stability: As I said I've read everything in one go so I could only go with the app saying the author release 2 chapters per week so I can't give more info but (btw author, if you want to release more chapter I'm all for it! Haha) 3. Story development: I've hear people say it was similar to another novel, couldn't tell since I didn't read the other one. The novel is perfectly paced in my opinion, although there are some points I don't get by exemple what's up with the villains she meet up and why is she giving boood etc? Well, I guess we'll understand later. Personally, I like it so continue the great work :). 4. Character design: Well, it's a fanfic so the characters are already mostly there but I like the character of Mio you created (well, the appearence and power are from other animes) the way you develop the conversation is interesting to me. 5. World background: Well, it's a fanfic so there's not much to create here. So overall, thanks for the chapters and thanks for writing this great fanfic and I hope to see more soon :)
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