Although the premise and general world is super fun and imaginative, it was hard to scrape past how poor the writing quality was. It’s interesting in that one can project onto the MC, but the writing quality made the story less about the story and more about the author’s personality. It’s definitely a story riddled with out-of-character instances. However, if you can get passed that, it is the book for you!
queenk091
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LIKEHi, I was thirteen at the time when I posted this story and I am currently fifteen, so yes I understand that the writting quality is not as great as the other books on this platform. So thank you for the harsh criticism, even though they were not pleasant to hear I will use them as motivation for my future chapters to improve the quality. Have a nice day