Review Detail of Dont_eat_my_tofu in F*ck Yeah! I’m The Villain
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GUYS!! I am the author of this Story but this is my reading account so it won’t tell you that..anyway yes my story has a lot of plotholes and yep it probably will seem rushed to a lot of you but this is my first time writting a story like this so if you could read with an open mind that would be appreciated. Also i am only 15 and started writting this at 13 so please don’t criticize me too hard😅 I am trying my best to write this that’s wIthin My capabilities😅. thank you for atleast trying to read it tho GUys!!! It may not be the best and probably has a lot of mistakes but i will try to fix thEm as much as i can!! Thank you fir taking your time to read this review!
F*ck Yeah! I’m The Villain
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kassy_urena:Is the story over?!? Or are you going to continue?!? I loved the Story and Lost Even track oF time reading it .. but it says completed 😢😢
SirZed:As there wasn't any tags, should I be expecting over the top romance or an actual villian?
not till where i read any romance but it got flaged (spoilered?) and a little romance would fit well too. and yeah it s similiar to other villainess stories maybe not as much as "lady demoness" but it flags some conflicts^^ and her thought fit too... just give it a try :D
SirZed:As there wasn't any tags, should I be expecting over the top romance or an actual villian?
Well This is probably the only valuable tip i can give You because it’s something i didn’t dO and i regret It but when writing a sTory Always write out Like a plan for the storY. make sure it has all of the characters and details about them that Are Easy to forget if you rely on your memory alone. also proofreading once isnt enough hehe you need to do it atleast three times. writing daily helps to improve the quality of your work because you get used to it and it’s not as laborous as to how it was before. If you get writers block don’t panic, watch a movie or listem to soMe music which is what i usually do and You will get loads more ideas oR Just read other stories tHat fit the genre you are attempting at. Also If you haven’t updated don’t panic and try to scrape something together another mistake that I did, take as much time as you need until you know exactly what you want to write. Last but not least don’t let the criticism get to you, use it as motivation because that means that there are people out there who actually like your Work anD are willing to give you tips to help you succeed!! Um I HoPe that helps!! Im not really Good at givng tips hehe. good luck with your story! And I will be on the look out for your book once you post it!
NostalgiaRose:I'm 13 starting my own novel: Dragons Aren't Real-Or So I Thought, so I'm kinda glad that I'm not the only one, any thoughts or tips will be greatly appreciated!
NostalgiaRose:I'm 13 starting my own novel: Dragons Aren't Real-Or So I Thought, so I'm kinda glad that I'm not the only one, any thoughts or tips will be greatly appreciated!
Jeez you wrote this at THIRTEEN???? It's fantastic, I thought you were muuuuch older, like in your twenties at least! All in all you're story's pretty great, the only things I can find fault with are the OPness of Melia, and the grammar and spelling mistakes. The latter can be easily fixed with auto correct or Grammarly (that's what I use) and the former isn't all bad just a personal quirk. You're really good at writing, I think that you should continue making stories! Would write a review but its locked and I don't know how to unlock it so the "frequency of updates" thing can't be filled out.
Rosalie_Parks:Jeez you wrote this at THIRTEEN???? It's fantastic, I thought you were muuuuch older, like in your twenties at least! All in all you're story's pretty great, the only things I can find fault with are the OPness of Melia, and the grammar and spelling mistakes. The latter can be easily fixed with auto correct or Grammarly (that's what I use) and the former isn't all bad just a personal quirk. You're really good at writing, I think that you should continue making stories! Would write a review but its locked and I don't know how to unlock it so the "frequency of updates" thing can't be filled out.
it takes a lot of courage to put yourself out there at so young an age, and for a first attempt, you are doing well. There are things you will learn from this that will help you if you decide to continue as an author, so first let me give you your due, for being a true "baddie" and presenting us with this lovely story. Your a talented person, I look forward to seeing you bloom and possibly follow in the footsteps of people like Anne Mccaffrey(famous fantasy novel writer) or Anne Rice. I will follow this little epic to the end and see how it turns out. Good Luck with it all. ☺️
Robert1s1:it takes a lot of courage to put yourself out there at so young an age, and for a first attempt, you are doing well. There are things you will learn from this that will help you if you decide to continue as an author, so first let me give you your due, for being a true "baddie" and presenting us with this lovely story. Your a talented person, I look forward to seeing you bloom and possibly follow in the footsteps of people like Anne Mccaffrey(famous fantasy novel writer) or Anne Rice. I will follow this little epic to the end and see how it turns out. Good Luck with it all. ☺️
Dont_eat_my_tofu:Well This is probably the only valuable tip i can give You because it’s something i didn’t dO and i regret It but when writing a sTory Always write out Like a plan for the storY. make sure it has all of the characters and details about them that Are Easy to forget if you rely on your memory alone. also proofreading once isnt enough hehe you need to do it atleast three times. writing daily helps to improve the quality of your work because you get used to it and it’s not as laborous as to how it was before. If you get writers block don’t panic, watch a movie or listem to soMe music which is what i usually do and You will get loads more ideas oR Just read other stories tHat fit the genre you are attempting at. Also If you haven’t updated don’t panic and try to scrape something together another mistake that I did, take as much time as you need until you know exactly what you want to write. Last but not least don’t let the criticism get to you, use it as motivation because that means that there are people out there who actually like your Work anD are willing to give you tips to help you succeed!! Um I HoPe that helps!! Im not really Good at givng tips hehe. good luck with your story! And I will be on the look out for your book once you post it!