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Review Detail of jonknowsnothing in One Piece: System

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jonknowsnothing
jonknowsnothingLv13yrjonknowsnothing

This story has the potential to be one of the best on the site, but it's been all put ruined. The author has fallen into the trap that most gamer/system stories do. That is to say, they have zero restraint when it comes to the system. To the point that thing are just ridiculous. It hits all the boxes of poorly designed system fictions. Given a Devil Fruit right off the bat, despite doing nothing to earn it. The system also (apparently) makes random changes to reality to make his life easier. The system applies to his Devil Fruit, so no experimenting, creativity or training. Just adding XP to the Devil Fruit tab. Also hinted he will get another Devil Fruit. One of the worst OP tropes. The system store that has no limits, including weapons from other anime and devil fruits. Gets a "mind palace". AKA a grinding system that lets the MC become even more OP by simply sitting in a corner while they sail around. Caps on learning skills are super low. He's able to learn Rokushiki before he even gets into the Grand Line. Super specific hidden quests that the MC just so happen to do anyway. What are the chances! And so on. There's a lot to enjoy, but it's mired in constant upgrades and BS rewards that take any suspense or tension out of the story. If you want to turn your brain off and read power fantasy wanking than you'll probably enjoy it. Otherwise, meh.

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One Piece: System

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AlucardVonHellsing
AlucardVonHellsingLv11AlucardVonHellsing

hey i have a request. can you look over my book? i use a system in it but i typically ignore that it is a thing after a few chapters in. i like you points in this review and would apprciate a review of my own. i would like to know your thoughts about my system and how its used. if you want to fufill my request you can just comment on a chapter i will more than likely see it if it is a respone to one of my own or a new comment. thanks.

Bard_Fall
Bard_FallLv3Bard_Fall

mate most of these author doesnt play proper grinding games before lol... And people who love playing them wont write novels as they would prefer to play their game instead.

Insert_Nickname
Insert_NicknameLv5Insert_Nickname

Spitting facts

Bard_Fall:mate most of these author doesnt play proper grinding games before lol... And people who love playing them wont write novels as they would prefer to play their game instead.
bloo
blooLv14bloo

Bro, most of these authors are probably youngsters. God knows what kind of taste I had when I was 15 y/o. They don't put that much thought into what makes sense, just what is cool

Bard_Fall:mate most of these author doesnt play proper grinding games before lol... And people who love playing them wont write novels as they would prefer to play their game instead.
thehivemind
thehivemindLv5thehivemind

You don't earn a devil fruit. U get lucky and find one

a_random_trio
a_random_trioLv3a_random_trio

meh if you were the person inside onepiece wouldn't you want a devil fruit too?

Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5Seikatsu

True

a_random_trio:meh if you were the person inside onepiece wouldn't you want a devil fruit too?