Review Detail of Long_Live_The_King in Harry Potter: Lost Son

It's a decent story but it has a lot of underlying errors. The author lacks a true understanding of many things not just the world of HP. The fact that the protagonist tries to hide his status as heir to the Black family does not make sense. Without the authorization of the legal authorities of the ministry, no 11-year-old boy becomes heir to a family of magicians just by donning a ring. The fact that the goblins discovered it makes it impossible for him to hide it from the ministry or the other pureblood families. I also can't understand how a harem can be conceived in the world of HP. The general idea of ​​the story is not bad but the errors in the plot that I find every time I read make it very difficult for me to give it a higher rating.Simple example: The MC calls Kretchar some time after his conversation with Walburga but the elf doesn't know who the MC is. That's ridiculous as Walburga should have told her the good news.