Review Detail of TheSillyWitch in My Alpha's Mate

This reads at worse then a teenagers fanfiction. The author can't keep their details straight. One chapter will end with the main guy deciding to leave her in her dress to not scare her and the very next chapter starts with her waking up in his shirt. And there are many examples of details getting mixed up. The author needs a geography lesson. Both New York and LA are in American. They both are in USA as well. And where is the Nethlands coming into this? The author's attempts at character development and dialog are cringe worthy. The author focuses on the main girl finding the main guy creepy and rejecting him and then decided it is to totally ok to fly across country, surprise him for his birthday and be declared as his girlfriend to his family and friends. There is no in between.