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With a glance, I could see Resident Evil and Fall Out’s concept, which is limitedly only okay for me. I will summarize why I gave 2 stars: 1. First of all, your way of putting the title is completely wrong, no one puts their TITLE in capital letters. 2. It’s kinda copycat regarding your plot, world background, even the Virus... 3. Grammar will be super unbearable for readers who pursue decent or better writing. 4. Your writing style is a mess. 5. You went premium too fast, normally, even the best story out there went premium around chapter 50-80, but yours is chapter 11. I hope this constructive review can give you something to comtemplate and improve yourself - Sincerely, your fellow author.

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Thank you. Will work on it.