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Jkesse
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pretty bad when you cant even bother to check the title of your novel. we share a bond is the correct way to pronouce and use the word bond, we are bound together is the correct way to pronouce and use the word you want to use. bound by the curse

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Bond By The Curse

Akhila_Ak

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Akhila_Ak
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Okay, now I kinda understand things. I am so sorry for the mistakes, as I am still trying to improve. Thank you so much for your feedback and let me see if I can change the title now😅... if possible I will change it. Thank you for the help ❤️

Anax90:Honestly you shouldn't feels so bad about mistakes. You'll learn and improve as you go along. I'm not sure if you can change the title but I think I can help a little explaining the English. Bond by a curse can make sense but it doesn't seem proper. If it was "The bond by a curse" it would be okay because it would mean bond because of a curse. It would make more sense for it to be "Bond due to a curse" "Bond because of a curse". Bond is a verb. You can use the past tense and it will be bonded which would make more sense without having to change much. "Bonded by a curse". As for using the word bounded. Bounded used for more forceful connections usually for things rather than people. Bond used for relations between people. Bounded can still be used for people but it would be negative or neutral and wouldn't suggest a positive connection but rather two people forcefully together because of something out of their control. Tbh English at times seems simple but its complex, so theres alot more to explain but I hope this helps
Akhila_Ak
Akhila_AkLv2Akhila_Ak

Well I am not very good at English but when I searched for the meaning I got these answers. 1.a thing used to tie something or to fasten things together. 2.an agreement with legal force. 3.join or be joined securely to something else, especially by means of an adhesive substance, heat, or pressure. And because the characters have a bond because of a curse(like how chemicals bond) I used this word. I am sorry for any mistakes, and I will make sure that I can improve my grammar and vocab. I hope the story is not that bad'😅

Akhila_Ak
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p.s.Thank you for your feedbacks though

Akhila_Ak:Well I am not very good at English but when I searched for the meaning I got these answers. 1.a thing used to tie something or to fasten things together. 2.an agreement with legal force. 3.join or be joined securely to something else, especially by means of an adhesive substance, heat, or pressure. And because the characters have a bond because of a curse(like how chemicals bond) I used this word. I am sorry for any mistakes, and I will make sure that I can improve my grammar and vocab. I hope the story is not that bad'😅
Jkesse
JkesseLv14Jkesse

It was used incorrectly in this instant tho. the meaning of bound : certain or extremely likely to happen, can also mean to tie something together, in this case the double meaning fits. some words have multiple definitions, while other definitions have multiple words. picking the right word with the right definition can be hard. if the right word isnt used it can make the sentence hard to understand, or mean something else entirely.

Akhila_Ak:Well I am not very good at English but when I searched for the meaning I got these answers. 1.a thing used to tie something or to fasten things together. 2.an agreement with legal force. 3.join or be joined securely to something else, especially by means of an adhesive substance, heat, or pressure. And because the characters have a bond because of a curse(like how chemicals bond) I used this word. I am sorry for any mistakes, and I will make sure that I can improve my grammar and vocab. I hope the story is not that bad'😅
Anax90
Anax90Lv5Anax90

Honestly you shouldn't feels so bad about mistakes. You'll learn and improve as you go along. I'm not sure if you can change the title but I think I can help a little explaining the English. Bond by a curse can make sense but it doesn't seem proper. If it was "The bond by a curse" it would be okay because it would mean bond because of a curse. It would make more sense for it to be "Bond due to a curse" "Bond because of a curse". Bond is a verb. You can use the past tense and it will be bonded which would make more sense without having to change much. "Bonded by a curse". As for using the word bounded. Bounded used for more forceful connections usually for things rather than people. Bond used for relations between people. Bounded can still be used for people but it would be negative or neutral and wouldn't suggest a positive connection but rather two people forcefully together because of something out of their control. Tbh English at times seems simple but its complex, so theres alot more to explain but I hope this helps

Akhila_Ak:Well I am not very good at English but when I searched for the meaning I got these answers. 1.a thing used to tie something or to fasten things together. 2.an agreement with legal force. 3.join or be joined securely to something else, especially by means of an adhesive substance, heat, or pressure. And because the characters have a bond because of a curse(like how chemicals bond) I used this word. I am sorry for any mistakes, and I will make sure that I can improve my grammar and vocab. I hope the story is not that bad'😅
Anax90
Anax90Lv5Anax90

This is a really harsh review. You assume the author couldn't be bothered but maybe English is difficult for them. You used the title of a Novel as the sole reason to leave a 1 star review and didn't give a review of any of the chapters, story and writing. Honestly its these types of reviews that cause alot of writers to quit

Ashwin_Ajaykumar
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Gettothepoint
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How inaccurate is this review... 1. The author explained that she isn't a native English speaker. The writing definitely proved that. So as others pointed out, it isn't that she didn't care but that just needs to improve her language skills. 2. "Bound by the curse" isn't the correct way. Bound comes from to bind. While the author is using to bond. So the right spelling is "Bonded by the curse". As an American reviewer, you should have known this as English is YOUR native language.

Jkesse
JkesseLv14Jkesse

why do people always want to add ed or s to the end of a word, bonded doesnt work bound does. deal with it.

Gettothepoint:How inaccurate is this review... 1. The author explained that she isn't a native English speaker. The writing definitely proved that. So as others pointed out, it isn't that she didn't care but that just needs to improve her language skills. 2. "Bound by the curse" isn't the correct way. Bound comes from to bind. While the author is using to bond. So the right spelling is "Bonded by the curse". As an American reviewer, you should have known this as English is YOUR native language.