After reading midway into the fourth chapter, I gave up. While the premise caught my eye, the quality of writing and rampant spelling errors made it an annoyance to read. The pacing is rushed, and the inciting incident happens before we even understand who the protagonist is. This story should’ve received a second draft and some help from an editor.
Rechiana
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