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Kritiko
KritikoLv104yr
2020-09-27 04:07

🧐 WARNING: To those people who are not a fan of books that depicts the dark side of humanity, blood, and gore, then this is not for you. 🔥Writing quality is superb. Some typos are on sight but only meticulous people would be able to spot them. If some books that are grammatically broken got 5 stars on them, then this deserves 9 stars for being able to make me cry. I also like the way how the MC deals with his enemies. 🔥The story development might be a bit fast for some but it was written pretty well . Not like your typical time skip and no development style. 🌱The character design, well, the concept of the MC's power is unique and his image when releasing his tenta..(spoiler alert) is kinda cool or perverted in a dark way? idk. try it 🔥Updating stability... so far so good. I mostly give 3 stars to most of my reviews regarding this criteria but for this book I'll make an exemption. (it's what it deserves) 🔥The world background, I haven't read up to his adventure in the new world but so far, as what I've read, it's on point aside from the year stated as the start of human evolution (Mr. author, you should edit the year when evolution started. It's ady 2020 yeah?) (the way you've mistakenly written the year seems dubious too me) 🤔 Anyway I loved reading it. 🐣PS: (A fan service waifu type would ruin this book. I hope something like that does not happen here) -The mature and dark vibe of this novel is its selling point. 🤔Was it a year already when I last rated 5*? Damn...

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JS_CLv3

thank you for this beautiful review, it has truly made my day and made me happy, and I feel honored that you rated my book 5 stars hahaha. But, considering that you saw the review that attended to the bad things of the book. I want to sincerely apologize for the sudden drop of plot quality at some chapters, I truly regret writing the chapters how they were and I wish I could re-write them, but there isn't much that could be done about it, I'm truly so sorry. And, you can see the story becoming a little light hearted at one point, but... dont be fooled by that. Anyways, those chapters were necessary for plot progression and have some details in them that will be very very important to later arcs, so that's that. Also, there many inconsistencies and what some call plot holes, but they all have their explanation. I have carefully wrote and planned the plot, so I can safely say that there are no plotholes. So, I just want to say, please bear with the story until chapter 20. I'm sorry if you get disappointed. However, I can safely that every chapter after that is "fucking hype" and I quoted my beta reader with hahaha. So, in short, I hope you can forget all the stupid amount of events that happen before chapter 20. And, I hope you can stick with the story until you reach chapter 21. And, if you want more explanation about those chapters, you can join the official discord server. Thank you for reading, have a great day!

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First few chapters Written very good, but it goes downhill after that. Mc is a person who can kill and destroy secret labs with more than 10k personel Mc also able to act as a vigilante killing villains Mostly from a certain organization, This shows that mc have experience and ability to do the deed. But! Here come the inconsistency, 1. a Certain newBie hero able to fatally wound mc. 2. MC clearly show no skill and Wisdom tHat Make his past deed possible. He’s acting like a total newbie. 3. World backstory is not clear at all, stuff goes places. 4. Plot hole, a certain policeman able to deduce that he’s the masked vigilante with no clear reason at all. there’s no witnesses or clear proof that mc is the reaper, but noo the police just said “yo, You’re the reaper aint Cha ya just popped up here 3 month ago blah blah.” and Mc jus meekly said “yes” come on dude people come and go All the time People without history Are normal, and mc does have hIstory! he have a family, his family are massacred, he goes missing for 10 Frickin years THAT should Plant a Gigantic red flag right after he popped out. 5. Too many inconsistencies About power system, skill, organization and character personality. I honestly cannot comprehend how a person who is able to kill and destroy a whole organization, a vigilante even is making stupid decisions its like The author decided to retcon his whole past to a newbie. First few chapters (before supermarket scene) are awesome, the rest is shit.

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