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I gave this story a 5-star review for everyone to see that this is a honest opinion! I love the writing quality. It actually impressed me! Very detailed and very intriguing! Summarize it; I love it. The Stability of Updates will be great too according to the author! Story development, heh ITS AWEESOMEE!!!! Character Design? Well what do you know? This story give you an OP MC!!! AND AN OP LOVER! Damn soooo perfect~~ World Background? Well you tell me? MAGICAL NETHERLAND?! ANGELS?! WEREWOLVES?! IF I WERE TO JUDGE DAMN ITS TOO GREAT! AHAHHAHAH I RECOMMEND THIS BOOK FULL HEARTEDLY BECAUSE THE FIRST CHAPTER JUST HITS THE SPOT OF INTEREST. I LOVE THIS WORK AND SO I HOPE, AUTHOR if your reading this. Be inspired and keep working on this story, I'll be here to support you when other aren't. #Fighting!! **. I'm going to keep reading this story :>

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Your review inspired me to write more, thank you~ Also, thanks for the suggestions, it helps! I hope you keep reading this novel of mine.

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