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PsyberRose
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This is a really good, feel-good type of story. *Writing Quality*: It's not perfect, but then again, who is? It is far better than a lot out there and to me, the grammatical or spelling errors are negligible. What is important is that the Author manages to convey the story, plot and feelings of the FL to us. *Stability of Updates*: 5* in good faith. I can see that the Author tries her best to be stable but you know, Life. *Story Development*: It's good. Not too fast or too slow. You can see how it began, and where it is headed and there are hints of something more in the future. You also get to see a whole new culture being described here so it's fun. *Character Design/World Background*: The characters are real, and you can see how they interact. Ther'es no real 'world building' since it's based on real life, but the way the Author shares 'her' world is interesting. More so since most are used to either Chinese culture or Western (or a fusion of both). All in all, this is an interesting story of how childhood sweethearts finally get together even though they both think it's a one-sided love. I still want the ML to suffer a bit though for all the pain he put the FL through with all his girlfriends. Pfffft. All the best, Author!

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Hey! this is one of the best review I have seen in days. You made my day❤️ Thank you.....SO MUCH. Yes I try, and I guess that's the most important thing about life, we should always try. I will edit the book. Once it's completed. Honestly it's just a first draft. But thank you for liking it anyways. Means the world to me, have a meaningful and happy life ❤️