Horrible writing. It's like a five year old writing a story. The author has no skill to write at all. And the grammer is very bad not readable at all. And very random in the plot of the story, which gives a very illogical and confusing story development.

world view is too small i can not think future or story's expectation is all ways wait and see but i do not like that i feel claustrophobic.

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this is an oki story if yu like a poor story written w lousy grammar that's all over the place i payed 2 fast passes just 2 read some more of the same take my advice if yu start to read this stick with the 57 free chapters then dump it not worth any fast passes at all i def wont continue 2 read it now that they charge for it

Jesus this is bad, the grammar and bad writing from the author make it downright unreadable. It's about the writing quality is something off Wattpad or an eight-year-olds dream journal.

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