Review Detail of NLinCH in The Archaic Dragon Mage

Thanks for the chapters. Always feels good to come back to your book. Though it can be difficult to get back into after a 1/2 year break, it keeps on giving. The story that isn’t cut down into chapters per se; that is what makes it unique, easy to keep reading and always in motion. I have difficulty finding stop moments, since you don’t even notice changing chapters. A critique in most storys without chapter titles; a feature of this one. I also love the character development; there are vew shifts with most changes not being described directly, but being felt over the story, percieved in their actions. From what I percieved with your comment/ personal story in winter, this story may be a way for you to flee from reality, taking your readers with you and by doing so leaving an imprint on reality it is something you may never forget to be proud about. The joy to loose once self in this fantasy world, this story, other universe, is something I am amazed by, am thankful to you for sharing it with us. I've read ca.130 chapters in less than 48 hours and will likely have another look at the end of this arc. That, to end this with, would be my suggestion to make the story better. It may be helpful to have titles for the big arcs; shool, (excursion, shool II,) werewolf Island, lizzard plannet, Greenland, freeing slaves. Thanks for writing through out everything that is gooing on with you, Thanks for offering an unobstructed path to fantasy, Thanks for this amazing story, And good luck, with it and you Thanks (I noticed that this is really mor of a reviw than a comment, so I added it here as well.)