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This is one of the few original novels I enjoy on this site. If you don't wanna read the rest of the review; all I can say is, I recommend this. It is very similar to a Gourmet from Another World but this one is focused more on wine making. I absolutely love that novel and reading this one it has its similarities but it also has its own identity. Grammar and spelling is really good, a few mistakes here and there but nothing that breaks your immersion. The MC is very arrogant and this one is rightfully so as he was an expert in his past life with few who could rival him, unlike the many other cultivation novels out there with MCs who are pointlessly arrogant and killing whoever they want. Lots of face slapping and most of the time it's not even the MC who does it plus they actually learn their lesson. Arrogant young masters but not braindead and pointlessly placed in so the MC could look like a good guy. This novel has broken the annoying trope and I love it.
The Immortal's Wine Store
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The more I read the lower the quality of the chapters get, this seriously needs proofreading as there are parts that have words missing or spelling or grammar mistakes. The beginning was really enjoyable, I might have jumped the gun with my review but you can tell the story started getting more and more mediocre. That is not to say it's not enjoyable but the quality has really gone down. At this point, a lot of different plotlines pop up before the main goal of the MCs and even the wine store has become a forgotten story. The author did try to bring it back but it feels really forced like they didn't have a choice but to do it. Also did the chapters get shorter? Webnovels quantity over quality has clearly infected this novel.