he was introduced as billions of years old, cold aloof god. but he talks way to much, and speaks many unnecessary things, 15 chapters in his 'cold' charecter is already breaking, and the story is already progressing to fast, I would be surprised is the emperor of the kingdom came down next chapter. two peerless beauties were generated out of no where,, just cause no doubt for smut reason which also brings the story down a bit. but the main problems as I said are. cold personality breaking, story moving way too quickly, and too much unessarcary speech on the mcs part. oh and too many random long drawn out info dumps.
Malignant
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LIKEThat novel has like at least 1-200 chapters in just its academy arc stage but the ending of that arc was worth the wait.
SavageGamer:man what everytime authors introduce cool cold charachters they have to change their personality.Had to drop supreme magus for this Reason as well After wasting My time for like 80 chapters smh .
I've found its best for us readers sanity to completely ignore any backstory of mc's, especially if they're some peerless expert or "hyper-intelligent" character that acts and has the ability of a mediocre 14 year old **** who suddenly developed magical powers. Or a "worlds greatest and most experienced mercenary" who has no common sense and is extremely naive.
nope but you literally create two woman out of thin air which just so happen to be unimaginably beautiful women that impress a man who claims to have seen every woman possible in his very long life, you brings a story down cause it shows you are a half arsed writer who cant even be bothered to make a decent lead female character.
The_Odyssean:a little smut or r18 doesnt bring a story down
Ove read close to 800 chapters but im too tired of the repeated “im crazy and she is too” between lith and solus, and it shocks me every time i see both of them act so insecure in literally every little thing Its cool to give characters flaws but giving then debilitating mental illnesses is just too much man
Chaoticmike:That novel has like at least 1-200 chapters in just its academy arc stage but the ending of that arc was worth the wait.
EroticEarwig:I've found its best for us readers sanity to completely ignore any backstory of mc's, especially if they're some peerless expert or "hyper-intelligent" character that acts and has the ability of a mediocre 14 year old **** who suddenly developed magical powers. Or a "worlds greatest and most experienced mercenary" who has no common sense and is extremely naive.