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Review Detail of Pork in The Immortal's Wine Store

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Pork
PorkLv123yrPork

he was introduced as billions of years old, cold aloof god. but he talks way to much, and speaks many unnecessary things, 15 chapters in his 'cold' charecter is already breaking, and the story is already progressing to fast, I would be surprised is the emperor of the kingdom came down next chapter. two peerless beauties were generated out of no where,, just cause no doubt for smut reason which also brings the story down a bit. but the main problems as I said are. cold personality breaking, story moving way too quickly, and too much unessarcary speech on the mcs part. oh and too many random long drawn out info dumps.

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The Immortal's Wine Store

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SavageGamer
SavageGamerLv13SavageGamer

man what everytime authors introduce cool cold charachters they have to change their personality.Had to drop supreme magus for this Reason as well After wasting My time for like 80 chapters smh .

Chaoticmike
ChaoticmikeLv14Chaoticmike

That novel has like at least 1-200 chapters in just its academy arc stage but the ending of that arc was worth the wait.

SavageGamer:man what everytime authors introduce cool cold charachters they have to change their personality.Had to drop supreme magus for this Reason as well After wasting My time for like 80 chapters smh .
DaoistPaleSnow
DaoistPaleSnowLv3DaoistPaleSnow

well if u like aloof mc go check Gourmet in another world lol just like this novel but instead he cooks and he has a 10-something ranked dog instead of cat

DaoistPaleSnow
DaoistPaleSnowLv3DaoistPaleSnow

oh forgot to add he is aloof and barely smiles he is expressionless most of the time

The_Odyssean
The_OdysseanLv5The_Odyssean

a little smut or r18 doesnt bring a story down

EroticEarwig
EroticEarwigLv13EroticEarwig

I've found its best for us readers sanity to completely ignore any backstory of mc's, especially if they're some peerless expert or "hyper-intelligent" character that acts and has the ability of a mediocre 14 year old **** who suddenly developed magical powers. Or a "worlds greatest and most experienced mercenary" who has no common sense and is extremely naive.

Pork
PorkLv12Pork

nope but you literally create two woman out of thin air which just so happen to be unimaginably beautiful women that impress a man who claims to have seen every woman possible in his very long life, you brings a story down cause it shows you are a half arsed writer who cant even be bothered to make a decent lead female character.

The_Odyssean:a little smut or r18 doesnt bring a story down
Shark_Bait_2857
Shark_Bait_2857Lv13Shark_Bait_2857

Ove read close to 800 chapters but im too tired of the repeated “im crazy and she is too” between lith and solus, and it shocks me every time i see both of them act so insecure in literally every little thing Its cool to give characters flaws but giving then debilitating mental illnesses is just too much man

Chaoticmike:That novel has like at least 1-200 chapters in just its academy arc stage but the ending of that arc was worth the wait.
BondageMaster
BondageMasterLv1BondageMaster

sometimes authors write it so bad or repeat it so much that it becomes impossible to ignore.

EroticEarwig:I've found its best for us readers sanity to completely ignore any backstory of mc's, especially if they're some peerless expert or "hyper-intelligent" character that acts and has the ability of a mediocre 14 year old **** who suddenly developed magical powers. Or a "worlds greatest and most experienced mercenary" who has no common sense and is extremely naive.