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TianGuez
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a Pleasant surprise in general terms, I will give my opinion for each aspect Writing quality: Since I use a translator (nothing like reading in your mother tongue) I am not very aware of how his grammar was, so I gave him a four star rating. Publication time: it is good but it does not have a fixed schedule, it seems to do a chapter every 4 days with occasional double chapters. Plot Development: Fairly balanced, There are no fights so far and had to go linearly to the original work, but has made daring but necessary decisions, such as removing 3 characters from the main plot and making an OC, quite understandable if we have Keep in mind that you have to handle 3 characters that would be considered main. Still to see how he will continue to handle the 3 Uchiha but for now I do not see many problems with them. Character design: The MCs exceeded my expectations, each one is psychologically separated from their original version, although if they share some aspects, the uniqueness of the reincarnated continues to prevail, something that is hardly seen in Fics. You can see the personality of the main 3, Madara is active and a leader but without being openly, Obito is emotional but without crossing the line of exaggeration and Itachi is serene and more polite. Regarding the secondary characters, little has been seen of how they have been impacted by the MCs, although it is noted that if they were a great influence on others, since Madara brought out the competitive side of Midoriya shows that the Mcs are not mere spectators. World Background: I think it is the poorest thing that this work has, it does not provide very detailed descriptions and it depends a lot on whether readers have seen the anime or read the Boku no hero manga, although it is true that it is a bit early to be able to give an optimal rating, But has not given many sparks in this regard.

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The Uchiha's in MHA (AU)

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DaoistShinobi
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Wow. I really appreciate all your feedback. I will definitely try my hardest to continue to improve! Thamk you a ton for this. As for the wrold background, any idea on how I could improve?

Atuli
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Amazing review ^^

TianGuez
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Something good you can do to improve is to try to write as if the world of the Fancic were yours, that is, the scenarios, Scenes and Atmosphere were of your own authorship and the only way to visualize it is with your description. just do not worry too much, many Fan fiction make this mistake since they are based on a world already raised, this is a difference between a writer and a Fanfic writer, the first poses a new world and the second is based on a world already existing but develop it to your own liking.

DaoistShinobi:Wow. I really appreciate all your feedback. I will definitely try my hardest to continue to improve! Thamk you a ton for this. As for the wrold background, any idea on how I could improve?