I am just a shameless writer rating my own fanfic i just wants people to read my fanfic and tell me what they think and as i said above its my first time writing so please go easy on me
Roh594
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LIKEYou should learn to use periods and commas. This is my tip for you, it's extremly important. And make some distance when writing not like this: Gkvfhvgjchbbcfjvfgggtgghcffhhggghvjjcggghhccggzujhjuhyfghhhhhdzhdfthcghhffftgghjvffgggthhcghccgffghchbggcfhctcgcffgghggghcggcghvhcgggggghhhhhggfthvhhcrthhhcghhvtgcghhgffrtthhhhhhhhhhcvkovfghkkncctzggggghkkvghhhvhzuhhhgzhhgggggghjvtzvhhhhhhhvgftggvhvvvvvvvvxhvfgghvhhvvhccgjbghxcggccgbjbbvtccvbkfuifkcuigkfuifiifufi But like this: Jfjdjhejkfkdkjdbjfkfjkkkcioeoeooeirkfkgkxkkxkfkirkrkrikgbjgjfjkfkrjjrkfkfkfkkgjgjgkrkrkkfkkfkkfkfkfjfjfji3ieoidididkkdkdkkdkdkkdkdkfkkdkdkkdkkdkfkdkkdkdkdk Kdkdkkfkfkirkfkfkkfkrjjfkfikfifkfkrkkrkfkkrkrkfikfifijfkfkfkkfkfkfjbfbfjgjbfbfbfjbgbifkfkfkfkgjjfosokslskdkdkdjdkjfjdjfjfjfkkf I honestly don't know how to describe it better then this, because my vocabulary is not great either. There is a word for this but don't know it tbh.
Kokushibou:You should learn to use periods and commas. This is my tip for you, it's extremly important. And make some distance when writing not like this: Gkvfhvgjchbbcfjvfgggtgghcffhhggghvjjcggghhccggzujhjuhyfghhhhhdzhdfthcghhffftgghjvffgggthhcghccgffghchbggcfhctcgcffgghggghcggcghvhcgggggghhhhhggfthvhhcrthhhcghhvtgcghhgffrtthhhhhhhhhhcvkovfghkkncctzggggghkkvghhhvhzuhhhgzhhgggggghjvtzvhhhhhhhvgftggvhvvvvvvvvxhvfgghvhhvvhccgjbghxcggccgbjbbvtccvbkfuifkcuigkfuifiifufi But like this: Jfjdjhejkfkdkjdbjfkfjkkkcioeoeooeirkfkgkxkkxkfkirkrkrikgbjgjfjkfkrjjrkfkfkfkkgjgjgkrkrkkfkkfkkfkfkfjfjfji3ieoidididkkdkdkkdkdkkdkdkfkkdkdkkdkkdkfkdkkdkdkdk Kdkdkkfkfkirkfkfkkfkrjjfkfikfifkfkrkkrkfkkrkrkfikfifijfkfkfkkfkfkfjbfbfjgjbfbfbfjbgbifkfkfkfkgjjfosokslskdkdkdjdkjfjdjfjfjfkkf I honestly don't know how to describe it better then this, because my vocabulary is not great either. There is a word for this but don't know it tbh.
Im putting in my Library, so yes i will read it. And don't forget a Cover for the ff. It will attract more people, most skip ff's without a cover.
Roh594:So will u read it or stop reading it ?
I tried add spacing in my 2nd chapter but i publish it and open the fanfic in my phone the spacing i added is not even present
Kokushibou:Im putting in my Library, so yes i will read it. And don't forget a Cover for the ff. It will attract more people, most skip ff's without a cover.
Roh594:I tried add spacing in my 2nd chapter but i publish it and open the fanfic in my phone the spacing i added is not even present
And change the name to "Reincarnated In Twilight" "I Reincarnated In Twilight" or "Im Reborn In Twilight" and every word big, it looks better this way.
Roh594:Thanks for that i needed it
Kokushibou:And change the name to "Reincarnated In Twilight" "I Reincarnated In Twilight" or "Im Reborn In Twilight" and every word big, it looks better this way.
Do that👍🏼about cover, i honestly don't know what kind of cover good is. But real life characters are little meh. So i don't know, maybe pick someone you image how the looks like. Maybe a martial arts character, i don't have a clue.
Roh594:Thanks definitely going change and add cover
I first thought about using alex lightwood from shadow hunters as the cover because i can't think of any anime character
Kokushibou:So maybe a anime character that looks like the mc.
You can do that, it's just that most of the readers on here are anime fans. But it's no big deal if you do real life characters, this is going to get popular either way. If you upload over 15 chapters, and do the things i said. Because grammar is really important, of course you don't need to perfect writing. Just learn to use commar's and period's atleast a little.
Roh594:I first thought about using alex lightwood from shadow hunters as the cover because i can't think of any anime character
Roh594:I first thought about using alex lightwood from shadow hunters as the cover because i can't think of any anime character
When you said anime character first on that came to my mind was mikoto he was badass i didn't compare him with alec
Kokushibou:He and alec look completly different🤣
Kokushibou:You can do that, it's just that most of the readers on here are anime fans. But it's no big deal if you do real life characters, this is going to get popular either way. If you upload over 15 chapters, and do the things i said. Because grammar is really important, of course you don't need to perfect writing. Just learn to use commar's and period's atleast a little.
Roh594:i don't remember the characters name he looks kinda like alec with hair downimage