Review Detail of Roh594 in I Reincarnated In Twilight

You should learn to use periods and commas. This is my tip for you, it's extremly important. And make some distance when writing not like this: Gkvfhvgjchbbcfjvfgggtgghcffhhggghvjjcggghhccggzujhjuhyfghhhhhdzhdfthcghhffftgghjvffgggthhcghccgffghchbggcfhctcgcffgghggghcggcghvhcgggggghhhhhggfthvhhcrthhhcghhvtgcghhgffrtthhhhhhhhhhcvkovfghkkncctzggggghkkvghhhvhzuhhhgzhhgggggghjvtzvhhhhhhhvgftggvhvvvvvvvvxhvfgghvhhvvhccgjbghxcggccgbjbbvtccvbkfuifkcuigkfuifiifufi But like this: Jfjdjhejkfkdkjdbjfkfjkkkcioeoeooeirkfkgkxkkxkfkirkrkrikgbjgjfjkfkrjjrkfkfkfkkgjgjgkrkrkkfkkfkkfkfkfjfjfji3ieoidididkkdkdkkdkdkkdkdkfkkdkdkkdkkdkfkdkkdkdkdk Kdkdkkfkfkirkfkfkkfkrjjfkfikfifkfkrkkrkfkkrkrkfikfifijfkfkfkkfkfkfjbfbfjgjbfbfbfjbgbifkfkfkfkgjjfosokslskdkdkdjdkjfjdjfjfjfkkf I honestly don't know how to describe it better then this, because my vocabulary is not great either. There is a word for this but don't know it tbh.

Thanks for that i needed it

So will u read it or stop reading it ?

No problem

Im putting in my Library, so yes i will read it. And don't forget a Cover for the ff. It will attract more people, most skip ff's without a cover.

I tried add spacing in my 2nd chapter but i publish it and open the fanfic in my phone the spacing i added is not even present

How? In the first chapter it worked just not enough.

And change the name to "Reincarnated In Twilight" "I Reincarnated In Twilight" or "Im Reborn In Twilight" and every word big, it looks better this way.

Thanks definitely going change and add cover

Do that👍🏼about cover, i honestly don't know what kind of cover good is. But real life characters are little meh. So i don't know, maybe pick someone you image how the looks like. Maybe a martial arts character, i don't have a clue.

So maybe a anime character that looks like the mc.

I first thought about using alex lightwood from shadow hunters as the cover because i can't think of any anime character

You can do that, it's just that most of the readers on here are anime fans. But it's no big deal if you do real life characters, this is going to get popular either way. If you upload over 15 chapters, and do the things i said. Because grammar is really important, of course you don't need to perfect writing. Just learn to use commar's and period's atleast a little.

And the distance thing if possible.

He and alec look completly different🤣

i don't know anime character who looks like alex lightwood

When you said anime character first on that came to my mind was mikoto he was badass i didn't compare him with alec

i don't remember the characters name he looks kinda like alec with hair down

I forgot his name too, the anime name is darker then black. Idk maybe do him or alec.

I have a webtoon character who looks kinda like alec the problem is another writer who is writing reincarnated in twilight novel already has him on the cover