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Fir3Cooz
Fir3CoozAuthor3yrFir3Cooz

Writing activity is tested. My first one wasn't very good so I'm trying to improve. My problem is that now I may be taking too much time to describe things and repeating myself a bit. It's just that when I'm writing, I imagine the scene drawn in manga so I detail it as much as I can. I'm not a person with great creativity and inspiration either, so please be indulgent and criticize intelligently. Thank you for reading.

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GodKing of Life

Fir3Cooz

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DaoistMoonbreak
DaoistMoonbreakLv2DaoistMoonbreak

Is this ff gonna be a harem or not ? đŸ€”đŸ€”đŸ€”

Fir3Cooz
Fir3CoozAuthorFir3Cooz

Yes.

DaoistMoonbreak:Is this ff gonna be a harem or not ? đŸ€”đŸ€”đŸ€”
Webzayne
WebzayneLv11Webzayne

Could you imagine managing a relationship with more than one woman; with it being a happy one? Honestly, most Harém stories end up bogged down by character bloat... What is the point of having so many women laying around, if they're just going to devolve into cardboard cut-outs after the fourth woman is added?

Fir3Cooz:Yes.
Demonic_Mori_Jin
Demonic_Mori_JinLv4Demonic_Mori_Jin

Is it r18

Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

There is tag about harem so if you don't like it dont complain just find another book of your taste.

Webzayne:Could you imagine managing a relationship with more than one woman; with it being a happy one? Honestly, most Harém stories end up bogged down by character bloat... What is the point of having so many women laying around, if they're just going to devolve into cardboard cut-outs after the fourth woman is added?
FistOfLove
FistOfLoveLv3FistOfLove

people always trying to bring logic into a fanfic tsk tsk

Shadewind:There is tag about harem so if you don't like it dont complain just find another book of your taste.
The_Hand
The_HandLv4The_Hand

Thanks for writing the story. its a great story. hope you will continue this greatness and perfection

Frodo_Proudfeet
Frodo_ProudfeetLv12Frodo_Proudfeet

hey author any new chapter please?