Writing activity is tested. My first one wasn't very good so I'm trying to improve. My problem is that now I may be taking too much time to describe things and repeating myself a bit. It's just that when I'm writing, I imagine the scene drawn in manga so I detail it as much as I can. I'm not a person with great creativity and inspiration either, so please be indulgent and criticize intelligently. Thank you for reading.
Fir3Cooz
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LIKECould you imagine managing a relationship with more than one woman; with it being a happy one? Honestly, most Harém stories end up bogged down by character bloat... What is the point of having so many women laying around, if they're just going to devolve into cardboard cut-outs after the fourth woman is added?
Fir3Cooz:Yes.
There is tag about harem so if you don't like it dont complain just find another book of your taste.
Webzayne:Could you imagine managing a relationship with more than one woman; with it being a happy one? Honestly, most Harém stories end up bogged down by character bloat... What is the point of having so many women laying around, if they're just going to devolve into cardboard cut-outs after the fourth woman is added?
Shadewind:There is tag about harem so if you don't like it dont complain just find another book of your taste.