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Adrianix1234
Adrianix1234Lv144yr
2020-09-13 21:09

The story is good ok, idk if author is trying to make a harem or what (because he only has female friends) but everything else is cool i just cant wait till he can copy Superman’s dna or Detective Martians... to be honest im surprised that the omnitrix can’t analyze Meta-humans... supposedly when the particular accelerator exploded, it changed their dna, so they technically are another race, and omnitrix favorite thing is gather information on genes and races, so mutations like poison ivy could be analyzed too but it would be too op if he could just copy everyone’s powers (except external one like the green lanterns or are connected to a dimension like the speed force)

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Firestorm808
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Thanks for the review. I can assure you that it won't be a generic harem. Like in real life, relationships come and go over time. Eventually, Fire and Ice will have to leave because of their international careers. To be fair, Swamp Thing was his first friend. Technically, the Omnitrix in the show does analyze various meta-human DNA around it like Cooper. It just doesn't store a copy of it since it already has a human DNA sample in its database. However, my Omnitrix has received numerous updates over the years which may or may not include that feature. Then again, I could have Ben use an alien with a similar power set. It would depend on the situation. In regards to external energies such as the Emotional Spectrum and the Speed Force, some transformations will be adapting in one shape or form to the new environment and the ambient energies.

JaimeX07
JaimeX07Lv6

I haven't read it but haven't seen one novel that has gotten multiple relationships over time right ( aka one at the time). readers either get too attach to current one or author sexualizes multiple females alot making readers think MC will get that female as well. not saying you won't do it right just my 2 cents

Firestorm808:Thanks for the review. I can assure you that it won't be a generic harem. Like in real life, relationships come and go over time. Eventually, Fire and Ice will have to leave because of their international careers. To be fair, Swamp Thing was his first friend. Technically, the Omnitrix in the show does analyze various meta-human DNA around it like Cooper. It just doesn't store a copy of it since it already has a human DNA sample in its database. However, my Omnitrix has received numerous updates over the years which may or may not include that feature. Then again, I could have Ben use an alien with a similar power set. It would depend on the situation. In regards to external energies such as the Emotional Spectrum and the Speed Force, some transformations will be adapting in one shape or form to the new environment and the ambient energies.
JaimeX07
JaimeX07Lv6

also harem is always correct

Firestorm808:Thanks for the review. I can assure you that it won't be a generic harem. Like in real life, relationships come and go over time. Eventually, Fire and Ice will have to leave because of their international careers. To be fair, Swamp Thing was his first friend. Technically, the Omnitrix in the show does analyze various meta-human DNA around it like Cooper. It just doesn't store a copy of it since it already has a human DNA sample in its database. However, my Omnitrix has received numerous updates over the years which may or may not include that feature. Then again, I could have Ben use an alien with a similar power set. It would depend on the situation. In regards to external energies such as the Emotional Spectrum and the Speed Force, some transformations will be adapting in one shape or form to the new environment and the ambient energies.
ViniDrako23
ViniDrako23Lv4

Does that mean he's going to have a relationship but he's going to break up with the girl?

Firestorm808:Thanks for the review. I can assure you that it won't be a generic harem. Like in real life, relationships come and go over time. Eventually, Fire and Ice will have to leave because of their international careers. To be fair, Swamp Thing was his first friend. Technically, the Omnitrix in the show does analyze various meta-human DNA around it like Cooper. It just doesn't store a copy of it since it already has a human DNA sample in its database. However, my Omnitrix has received numerous updates over the years which may or may not include that feature. Then again, I could have Ben use an alien with a similar power set. It would depend on the situation. In regards to external energies such as the Emotional Spectrum and the Speed Force, some transformations will be adapting in one shape or form to the new environment and the ambient energies.
Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

the typical pokemon collection

ViniDrako23:Does that mean he's going to have a relationship but he's going to break up with the girl?
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