Review Detail of Simon_Sjogren in It hurts when you fall from heaven

Pros: fast advancing story, regular updates by author, very interesting characters based on actual mythological creatures and the world building seems exciting. cons: certain parts the story sometimes advance too fast forcing you to re-read a certain part twice to understand it, there has been some grammatical & punctuation errors along the way but the author has massively improved along the chapters and there's a clear improvement.