This Novel is honestly, .........just Perfect. I don't know how to describe it other than with the word " perfect " because it does have good grammar. Sure, not EX-ranked Grammar :) xD but it is still better than 99% of Webnovel and is really readable and likeable. Other then that, I really love the Mc and his personality, he could have made his reveal cooler or better but that is just a personal opinion and doesn't effect the Novel by much! His Love Interest and the whole Story is really good till now and I can't wait for more. Oh, almost forgot that..... I really love it that you allow yourself to add some things like personality to the characters like you did in the 4th chapter by adding some small details to the characters. would have been boring if not :9 **: I didn't prove- read my review for false wording or grammar and I honestly don't care xD. Neither is English my Mother language so......:D
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