Review Detail of slaktarfisken in The Demon Monarch System

I'm here again to write a second review, mainly because the one I wrote a while ago has aged tremendously in a short time. Though I have not gone back and re-read previous chapters, the author has gone over and beyond fixing the criticism I previously presented. Though there still are some phrases and wording that I notice as frequent and repetitious, it might as well only be because I have already seen them once before. The story is still satisfyingly fast-paced, but the writing previously felt a little too hasted has vastly matured into engaging and well-thought prose. Kudos to the author, and I hope to be in for a long, exhilarating story!