Review Detail of FallunKing in The Mason Carter Chronicles

Obligatory Review here, and honest or modest if you will. Yo be honest, this story was created with way too much Anime/Manga influence. But, as I continued to write it, the more I came to appreciate it. It's sometimes hard to keep the story on a easy to read pace without crossing into either too fast, or too slow in the story development. It has surprised me how many people do read and enjoy it, so I am thankful on that prospect, though I would really appreciate more reviews and collections of course! It would also be awesome to get feedback or even suggestions on how to improve the story. I'm always open to ideas. I'm not looking for votes or anything like that, though it would be appreciated, I only want to share my thoughts and ideas with the world. So thank you all for reading, and I hope you all enjoy the story!