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Review Detail of Kirbyisgreen in Journey Of A Legend

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Kirbyisgreen
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Interesting idea for a novel. Good start, keeping on writing and improving your craft. My suggestion is that the MC feels a little flat at a glance, perhaps give him a bit more personality or motivation. Otherwise, keep at it my friend.

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Journey Of A Legend

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