Review Detail of RJMidnight in Journey Of A Legend

It is only four chapters, you cannot tell much from, but at this point, you are doing a good job. Your synopsis was good and got me interested and you storytell well. I like your writing style, it is nice. You set up a god worldbuilding, showing us a new world and hiw things are done there. The only problem is the bit of grammar mistakes. If you look back and reread your story, you can catch the mistakes. Keep up the good work!