For starters, I think that the author has a good grasps of writing because the sentences are well written. And just in a few chapters, the author already managed to leave an impression of what kind of personality the main character has, which I think is good. Just regularly update, and add more descriptive details to your story. Good job! and Good luck! 😀😊
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