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Review Detail of Alcheluk in The Master of Seventh Gate

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Alcheluk
AlchelukLv113yrAlcheluk

Let me start with good things: Worldbackgorund is (spoiler!) not so fun, it is very well wrtitten and introduced with solid logic behind it with a pinch of fantasy. Characters: I like the development of them and thier adventures - feels kind of post apocaliptic slice of life. I must say that the MC name is kind og unique had to read for 10 chapters until I stopped reading it as „Author”... Story development: I only read for about 50 chapters (sometimes skipping few) to how the author writing changed. Besides kind of cliche solo adventure start for better life, I wholly enojed the development. Neutral: Updates - can’s sat much novel at the time of review is on privildge therfore author is obliged now to regular updates so full mark here. Bad: Grammar - I’m not native speaker but I stongly hope author got editor past 50 chapter, it’s not only the missing comas and dots. It’s more about structure of phrases and the narrator perspective - for me it was just hard to read and I could’t enjoy it fully. Summary: Great story with nice development, but author should really use an ediotr and better synopsis of story.

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The Master of Seventh Gate

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Naz_Mzf
Naz_MzfAuthorNaz_Mzf

Thank you for the honest review, It means a lot to me. [img=recommend] 1.MC name is a unique Persian ancient name, people used it like 2500 years ago. Certainly not known nowadays. It means "Fire". 2.Editor: Unfortunately, I can not afford to take an Editor for now (perhaps later), although I love this story... [img=recommend]

Alcheluk
AlchelukLv11Alcheluk

I could phrase better the worldbuilding, it was dramatic ;-) All the best to Athor and Author !