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Annoushka_
Annoushka_Lv134yr
2020-10-20 02:08

This looks like it's going to be goooooood I cannot wait to read this book I was drawn in by the synopsis. I so hope I'm not disappointed 😅😅

Fantastic Life Tycoon(dropped)

Bad_Road
4.7
11 Chs

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Bad_Road
Bad_RoadAuthor

I would suggest you to not go ahead to be honest. I am revamping certain old things. just wait a little or just read this one and a better version should be up in a few days

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LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2

Wait are you changing some parts of the story like scenes and etc or just editing the writing quality/grammar? because I have been saving up and felt like reading now so im wondering if its better to wait for you to finish or just read?

Bad_Road:I would suggest you to not go ahead to be honest. I am revamping certain old things. just wait a little or just read this one and a better version should be up in a few days
4yr
Bad_Road
Bad_RoadAuthor

wait 3-4 days. I am rewriting some parts. there's a problem with this one. my side characters got more character than mc in this one. he became a beta jap MC somehow

LohQiwan:Wait are you changing some parts of the story like scenes and etc or just editing the writing quality/grammar? because I have been saving up and felt like reading now so im wondering if its better to wait for you to finish or just read?
4yr
LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2

oh shit I fuxing hate Japanese mc they all just stupid, brainless, pussy slaved idiotic mc's that are a slave to there harem.

Bad_Road:wait 3-4 days. I am rewriting some parts. there's a problem with this one. my side characters got more character than mc in this one. he became a beta jap MC somehow
4yr
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Bad_Road
Bad_RoadAuthor

yea don't read it. I am rewriting it to make it better and a more machiavellian character. just wait a few days. I will post an update and a new book

LohQiwan:oh shit I fuxing hate Japanese mc they all just stupid, brainless, pussy slaved idiotic mc's that are a slave to there harem.
4yr
LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2

Oh k thanks because I hate novel mc's like typical anime mc's, will read 3-4 days later

Bad_Road:yea don't read it. I am rewriting it to make it better and a more machiavellian character. just wait a few days. I will post an update and a new book
4yr
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Author here. This is an erotic fiction. I know there is nothing in the start but I can guarantee that if you give it a chance, you will probably be having issues keeping it down. The novel is mainly a wish fulfillment with story development. There will be conspiracies and fights but most of the story will be feel good. Even the scenes with humiliation and whatnot should help some of you get off. Thanks for giving it a chance.

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Moar!!!!!!!!!!!

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LustMaiden
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Like where this is going. excited about the famous characters that should appear in the future.....

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Richard_AW
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Spoiler Alert. Author,The rest of the chapter is good.But After that chapter when Betty kissed Andrea,it gave a bad taste to me(Light NTR).Even though it aint being done with a Man. I Hope that kind of thing aint happening anymore in the upcoming chapter.

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The4thWAH
The4thWAHLv14

I want to see where this is goin.. Up till now its great read and bring no disappointment. Keep the good work author.. I need a filler, i need a filler.

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wit_daface
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Plot can be a bit cliche but as it's a wish fulfilment novel i dnt take it to heart. updates are decent. Some characters seem flawed but it might improve later so not to harsh on that. Be warned there is ntr so far his gf making out with a friend but looks like it'll be more and from the context ..the mc liking it? ...anyway this is my review so far will change later if I continue to read.

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raghavjpr
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I like where it is going. I think the MC is a more paranoid than he should be after the bots are given by system so at least it should be fine for letting them do things on there own. Anyway I like the way you write and how the story progress. A bit of erotic and a bit of plot makes all the story more interesting.........Keep it up........ Author you have my support and best wishes.

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Harem_God
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This is good, keep it up author HAREM IS LIFE

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Sigh, would I try to write a normal review? Eh, no. I just like it and read in a good mood, so it's an easy 5 star from me. Biased? Asf! Either way, for now it's looking like a standard reincarnated in our world to redo disappointing live, but with lewds! What life without lewds, eh? Actually not my type of stories, but that one is nice.... I mean, if you throw yourself in time and don't become famous, rich and **** some milfs - what the point of you living? 🤔🤔🤔 10/10 would bang.

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