Review Detail of Tanpa_Nama_7787 in NARUTO - Bad choice

this mc is sumire or naruto?... Why the creature(sumire) already have harem?.. i like this mc, this mc definitely not idiot.. but.. my question is: why this ungrateful bastard pet have a plot when he/she is disgusting?..why you can't focus on the development story in mc?..or development in harem member?.. or development in mc power..?. i know this grammar in your fanfic is very..very terrible, but don't get me wrong at least you make this fanfic with english language [img=recommend].