Review Detail of Light_ray in An unexpected adventure

This is the first story on this Platform which is quite different and unique from the adventurous stories here. Well the author has the potential to create a good story. That's why I'm giving a five star review despite there are some mistakes because I know that author will work upon that. Apart from this please keep up with the updates to make the readers hooked to your story. Keep it up author.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]