damn bro this is pretty fire! all sarcasm of course. writing quality 5☆: spelling and sentence structure is correct and easy on the eyes, great read for those who want to learn English and how to write professionally. easy to understand what the author is trying to convey. story development 5☆: great development, starts out slow and progressively gets to where the story needs to be for its genre. Though a little hard to understand in the beginning it gets easier with time as things are explained with great amounts of info, not too much and not too little. Character development 5 ☆: Main character starts out with being nothing more then normal and then progressively gets stronger and smarter throughout the endeavors the protagonist embarks on. side characters I feel like mature just as fast though it'd be nice to see side chapters just for them to understand them better, though still great. updating stability 5☆: great amount of chapters being update which makes me scared as most authors who update just as much go through writer's block so itd be nice for you to slow down but if you are a good author like some then go for it! world background 5 ☆: great detail as to where we are and how adventures are undertaken. some places are hard to describe in imagination but the authors use of imagery provides us with enough detail to understand what is happening and where it happens! all in all great read and I definitely recommend it to those who like adventurous novels like this!
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