The first thing that I like is that the author created a new background for the MC to play around in. The author uses the DC world as a backdrop currently, while being a gangster in Macau which I love. The writing schedule he has is also nice. Overall, well-written story that I hope continues and finishes.

Too early for patreo.n author. Write more chps then ask later. The story is interesting though, well the power is. Not much to judge about plot but hope u fk cannon and do ur own shit. The mcs contract based power is dope and op. Seems like u need brains to use it well. Hope mc will be smart and not some perverted retard. If romance just build and dont make em useless sluts or mc a man slut. Gl

as much as you trying to bring a OC in DC it has fail, that in most spectacular ways... -OC giving up benefits of surprise to all the opposition's of MC ( revealing all of his powers) -OC gets power through soul, makes sense he will try to rob as much as souls he could but he doesn't.(kills enemies without even taking their souls.) -could create minions of unquestionable power but still makes only one.(even if he could he should make more by killing most of the goons in city) -MC realize his mistake of not having much agility but doesn't even fix it..(repeating mistakes over and over again) -could wipe the mindslave head of goon but no!!! he is acting as a savior of humanity, when he kill more than ten people in first week of transmigration.(hypocrite) -acts as he is smart, but every developments till now has been brute forcing his way with his power without use of single nuero cell.( dumb brat)

You should include HAREM in your tags, so i shouldnt waste my time on reading it. Sersiously its fine if you want to write a harem story but why would you not make it known in some way. Then the people who dislike harem would move on to another story.

Good fanfic with good grammar. We haven't seen much of the plot yet but i like what I'm seeing. I hope author doesn't drop. Keep up the good work author! [img=update]

honestly, this is like the best dc fanfic and I know that because I have read all dc fanfics that are have above 15 k words, and it's much more than a power fantasy, and if you dun get excited by the prospects of mc's power in a place like dc universe, then you're probably dead inside already😔 jk, but really check this out

I like the story so far. The ability is unique and reminds me of an old one shot from ff.net "Making a deal with a kawaii devil." The faith energy also seems interesting.

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Overall a great story -Auhor’s writing quality is a little lower than the normal standard, but a lot better than many people on here -Release Schedule is random, however Chapters are very long -Story and Characters are more interesting here and obviously this is the DC Universe so its going to be interesting

good quality writing with a nice plot and a weekly update. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................................................................