Review Detail of Bok_Knee in When You Are Mine

I know the ML is a playboy and all. It was mentioned at the start when the ML was introduced. However, I personally don't like how he went on and found another girl to do it with even after he met the FL. Not only that, he just randomly chose a girl wearing skimpy clothes and showing lots of skin. He has no control over his desires. Other than the ML's problematic personality which I found, there were a few grammatical errors. I have read around 50 chapters and you will like the story if you have no problems with such behaviours of ML. The writing skills of the author is good as well. May be the author can reread once more to prevent grammar mistakes before releasing the chapters. Overall, I appreciate the author's efforts and her skills, it's just not my cup of tea.