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Midnyt_Zun
Midnyt_ZunLv104yr
2020-09-26 09:42

I give this book one hundred stars! There is a nice plot and interesting scene. I can't wait to find out what happen next!!! Keep it up!!!👍👍👍

Her Minds Instinct

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4.9
236 Chs

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Dashionfabulous
DashionfabulousLv1

I am obsessed with this book. Its given me motivation to explore different books. There is drama, romance and most of all suspense. I stan.

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mssuigeneris
mssuigenerisLv3

Woah. Let me set the backdrop for ya. The story has a grayish, if not a darker tone. I must warn you of its extremely sensitive theme, which really piqued my attention ever since the flashbacks began. Writing - my issues lie in the first poetic entry because of the errors I spotted. Also, in the first chapter, there were paragraphs that are a tad bit long, so it will be better to space them properly to give the readers more room for breathing. Once you get past the first chapter, there's no going back. The rest were splendid. Characters - Oh they were really the ones who got me into this. I like how they were described, and how real they seem. Its like they're really alive as you read them. Their dialogues are a delight to read. Development - Sold for me! the flashback transitions? Genius. It keeps the mystery going. The recurring theme becomes obvious by then. Overall, this book is a must read for those who like angsty and grayish themes. Good job! 👏

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melancholy_sins0
melancholy_sins0Lv2

I'm not even going to read beyond chapter 2 before giving a review, because that's just how good it is. Look. Character development, story development, and everything that makes a novel good, disregarding the actual storyline, is incredibly hard to do. Y' know what the author did? The beginning of the story provided more "flow" than my entire story will ever have. That's just how skilled I found it. In fact, I find it crazy that this novel hasn't exploded yet. Like many people have already said, there are just enough details that it doesn't ruin the "visualization" of the image the author directed through her/his/ it's words. But yet, it's so detailed at the same time, that it confuses me (guilty of over-detailing lol). Don't be discouraged by the large rating, nor the synopsis. Just read the darn chapter, and don't waste your time love. aNd If I SEe "yOu have gRAmMar iSsUEs. I WiLl suE YoU I'm kidding, I love you lol <3 You too author.

4yr
TimVic
TimVicLv15

Author of Godly Abomination Here ✋ first off, I'm gonna say... Good job sweetie. This is a masterpiece. You write poetically. Good story line and hooking scenes. Keep it up dear. For the readers, this novel is worth your time. Make sure you give it a try. Seria Love, May you write abundantly.

4yr
Light_ray
Light_rayLv14

Intriguing Title and a realistic Story line. Writing quality is perfect so with daily updates. the character development is just awesome. Wanna to see how the FL will rise and become a strong lady. You are doing great job, dear author. Keep up with this great work.

4yr
Moongirl_Mich
Moongirl_MichLv11

The plot of the story suits well to the title. It was so amazing it's like your in the world of the person talking in the story. It's like you are actually in that situation every emotion is in it. All of the readers will enjoy this story surely.

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Bad_Totodile
Bad_TotodileLv3

The chapter one is quite good- on grammar? i cant judge that, mines a waste lol, based on synopsis.. the Mc's intelligent... Tough woman- I like that.. good job- A novel that can inspire..................................................

4yr
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Kvng_zeno
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must say this is quite interesting......................... .. ........... ..... ... ... .. ... . . . . . . . . . . . ........ .........

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