After 250+ chapters, I'm back with another review update that will probably help many of you decide whether or not to read this novel. 1) The first 50 chapters may have some minor grammatical errors (nothing too big). Beyond chapter 50, I've been trying to fix as many errors as possible but there might be a few (Yes, I'm a human being too. Surprise!). 2) All my chapters are above average, i. e. 1600 words or more. (2 chapters per day = +3200 words.) 3) This novel is NOT only about the virtual world. In the future there will be a lot of cultivation (Cultivation lovers, get on board! I promise an exciting ride!) 4) Bored of stupid protagonists who let their enemies go for reasons of " kindness"? This is your story then, you won't regret it! Believe me, if you read more than 100 chapters, you won't be able to stop. 5) What are you doing here? Quickly go read the novel!
XIETIAN
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LIKENoooooiiiiice:Every fan of this book out there we need to get this book to the top position in rankings!
Ight I'm back! I can say for sure that it is better in the later chapters than in the earlier ones. I like your approach with the quests and the NPC's. I feel like I can confidently say that at chapter 200 I'll love it even more. Keep up the good work! ✌🏾
IMostlyReadHar3m:I will give it another try Author. I'll come back if I like it after 100 chapters. Thanks.
Oh, believe me... you will love the story if you manage to go beyond 100-150 chapters. All the readers who did go beyond the initial ones say so, not me as the author xD
IMostlyReadHar3m:Ight I'm back! I can say for sure that it is better in the later chapters than in the earlier ones. I like your approach with the quests and the NPC's. I feel like I can confidently say that at chapter 200 I'll love it even more. Keep up the good work! ✌🏾
I believe it's a fun read. Give it a try and see if you like it, I don't know how much of a reader you are but if you can get to 100 chapters then you should have your answer by then.
I_am_Legend:Is this novel good guys?
He’s definitely right. Honestly I had so much to complain about in the start but when I got into the higher chapters I read it so much that I finished everything In a day. It’s rare for me to ever complete novels as I get irritated really easily but looked here I finished all 300 in a day without reading anything else. If you have time tho I suggest you edit the early chapters and make it as clean as possible because the readers decide if they wanna read something by the starting chapters alone, but if they aren’t interested and things are looking bad they drop it. I almost did but thank god I came back cause If I didn’t I would’ve missed this great piece of work.
I've been craving to read novels similar to Shura wrath, Evil dragon online game, guild wars etc for a long time, and your novel just matched. While cultivation online is also a good novel and is similar to the novels i mentioned above, i just cannot stand the MC being so naive, childish, dense in Cultivation Online novel of Author MLB. Even if there's going to be character development for cultivation online mc, i can't afford to waste my time watching the mc growing from complete idiot to smart, it'll take at least 500+ ch imo and i can't afford to wait that long. So, Thank you for writing this kind of novel.
XIETIAN:Oh, believe me... you will love the story if you manage to go beyond 100-150 chapters. All the readers who did go beyond the initial ones say so, not me as the author xD
I guess it depends on preferences. More than one reader said they found my novel more entertaining than Cultivation Online, but as I said, it depends on personal preferences. Everyone is different after all.
Ordinaryhuman:I've been craving to read novels similar to Shura wrath, Evil dragon online game, guild wars etc for a long time, and your novel just matched. While cultivation online is also a good novel and is similar to the novels i mentioned above, i just cannot stand the MC being so naive, childish, dense in Cultivation Online novel of Author MLB. Even if there's going to be character development for cultivation online mc, i can't afford to waste my time watching the mc growing from complete idiot to smart, it'll take at least 500+ ch imo and i can't afford to wait that long. So, Thank you for writing this kind of novel.
Well he has been blind and bed ridden since 12 so...it's to be expected that he has no idea of out side world and it's logical for mc to be naive..if he was super smart that would be illogical and ruin the story
Ordinaryhuman:I've been craving to read novels similar to Shura wrath, Evil dragon online game, guild wars etc for a long time, and your novel just matched. While cultivation online is also a good novel and is similar to the novels i mentioned above, i just cannot stand the MC being so naive, childish, dense in Cultivation Online novel of Author MLB. Even if there's going to be character development for cultivation online mc, i can't afford to waste my time watching the mc growing from complete idiot to smart, it'll take at least 500+ ch imo and i can't afford to wait that long. So, Thank you for writing this kind of novel.
My novel has no holes in it and I'm proud of that. There are only grammatical errors in the first chapters. As for plot holes, absolutely and definitely impossible. So you have the wrong novel my friend.
AleccrimD:I just have a question before I start reading ... Is this the novel that the author wrote R-18 scenes at the beginning of the chapters, but then removed the R-18 scenes because of criticism from some readers? Because of this, some chapters have had some strange holes in the story.image
XIETIAN:My novel has no holes in it and I'm proud of that. There are only grammatical errors in the first chapters. As for plot holes, absolutely and definitely impossible. So you have the wrong novel my friend.image
AleccrimD:Sending me away just because I asked a question... That was not cool...image