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Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv112yr
2022-01-02 02:52

Firstly update real quick, I love this book, good grammar too, Can't wait to read chapter 4 and many more chapters to come . I found myself reading and enjoying this novel more than I thought. The author is talented, very talented I love this keep it up can't wait to see more books from you.

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That1Otaku
That1OtakuLv12

There's not much yet but from what I've read I'd give this a 5.0. Theres practically no gramer errors the plot is fleshed out really nicely and I'm really enjoying the chracters and setting. All in all i'm expecting an amazing read. (and author if your reading this your doing an amazing job💜💜💜 I'd love to give you my power stones but that setting not on so if you have a patreon I'll gladly buy you a ☕)

4yr

TaintedMetal
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So far so good on the work that's been done so far. Characters are great in terms of their presentation and the technique used here is respectable. Sometimes reading through the paragraphs can feel like there's much cause some sentences are jammed into one bigger paragraph, but this is one of those books that does require time to get through. Maybe some spacing for the larger paragraphs would be best. Maybe 2-3 sentences per paragraph unless the character is explaining something. Keep up the good work author!

2yr
rebecca_ringdomsto
rebecca_ringdomstoLv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr
Vienna_Gu
Vienna_GuLv2

Hi Author, your book is amazing because the story them is different with neatly writing style. Surely, i will add your book to my library for my accompany my break time. All over is good, keep writing, Author

2yr
SJCTheLegacy
SJCTheLegacyLv10

As of the moment, there are not many chapters to give a proper review, but in these four-chapter, I can feel that this novel will grow into something big, keep it up.

2yr
BotBrain
BotBrainLv11

The nicely lengthed chapters left me wanting more and the interesting depth of the characters gives me the impression of a well-thought-out story. Well done and great read!

2yr
Yuinetro
YuinetroLv2

Amazing read. carefully crafted, Adoneous (sorry if i spelled wrong) adventures are something I'm looking forward to. The story has not progresses far enough for me to say anything else. looking forward to this book

2yr
Wishful_thinker1
Wishful_thinker1Lv10

Wow, I'm really impressed by the writing quality, you nailed it. And the plot of the story is interesting, I'm already hooked on this one. Keep the updates coming 😁

2yr
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