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Let me be honest the Grammer is unbearable the simplest of mistakes are made and ruins the flow of the novel the author seems to not care much to remember what he just wrote down then says or does something the same a few paragraphs later the MC is really dumb for a dude that was the best scientist author could be bothered to re read his work let alone remeber if he wrote down “looks at hands and they seem bigger” then MC goes and looks in water to see hes red like what

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