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2020-11-25 01:21

Totally engaging story!! I like how refreshing your characters are. You were able to bring them to life with your dialogue and characterization. Your ML has an amazing character development. highly recommended[img=recommend]

Capture The Elusive Mandarin

Jyojiko
4.9
282 Chs

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Yukina_Miu
Yukina_MiuLv2

Defenetly an interesting story, both plot, and character-wise. From the few chapters that I have read I can say its a story worth giving a read to, and the writing itself is fantastic. best regards, author.

4yr

Pacesetter
PacesetterLv6

Thanks author. Your way of writing and the conversations between the characters is a breath of fresh air and can be easily resonated with by most people. Looking forward to a great read!

4yr
MysticAmy
MysticAmyLv12

Leaving a review because WHY NOT!? The story is good! 🥰 Writing quality: I like how I could see the improvement of the author overtime! 🤩 In the first chapters, you could see some struggles in narration but as you go, the improvements are evidently seen by the use of appropriate vocabularies, enhanced grammar, and creative usage of figures of speeches! 🤩 Applause! Update stability is given—I could see the continuous efforts of the author to continue updating for the story despite the busy schedule! 😉 Story development is good! The way the plot flows is not too fast and not too slow as well! 🤩 The author has done well in doing the balance—making sure that the readers will be entertained as well! Great job! 💪 Character design is one thing I appreciate in this story. As we go along, you would see the development of her characters! I love Dana’s improvement—giving me the concept of luctur et emergo! 😍 World background—I have nothing more to say than the author preparing great research and build up before and during her days of writing and continuing this story. 😘 Overall, this would be a great read! I know that her upcoming stories would be interesting—maybe even far off better than this one! 💪 Keep up the great and awesome work, Jyojiko! 🥳

4yr
Readoholic
ReadoholicLv10

Early review to show support to the lovely author for a wonderful story. Although it is very difficult to comment on the story plot as of now, the synopsis is really catchy. It is short yet very well explained and to the point. I am loving the story so far and Dana's character is really lovable. The narration is perfect and the author successfully delivered the context of the plot. I really felt the aura of being in my teenage days. It is relatable to real life and can see myself in most of the scenes. I am looking forward for the story to unfold and see how she celebrates her 18th Birthday. Kudos... :) To improve: * You can break the lengthy paragraphs into smaller ones for a better understanding (reader's perspective.) * You need to proofread your chapters as minute errors are seen which are actually not interrupting the chapters.

4yr
Nicole_99
Nicole_99Lv12

I liked how the characters' personality are easily visualised. The conversation topic touched are also highly likely to happen and is also a good aid for people who are still at a loss of what to do with their life. It really hits home. On a separate note... You really love Shanghai and the word "capture", huh. 😂

4yr
AutoChaos
AutoChaosLv13

Did you just wrote it for contest lmao. LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

4yr
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i love reading all the books that's on this site? [img=recommend][img=coins][img=fp][img=update] [img=update] all of the books that's on this site are good to read

4yr
Killerpants
KillerpantsLv2

A hooking synopsis and interesting character design. The world that the author built here is truly fascinating. Character interaction is also well-written and the very concept of this story is intriguing. Good luck in the contest, author! Keep up the hard work!

4yr
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