Review Detail of ShadowH1 in Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Although I have not really read that much of the story and have skipped most chapters, I still believe my review to be fair. From what I can tell so far, the story likes to make great leaps in logic that does not make any sense. Also the writing quality is pretty bad. I mean how come that the last sentence of every paragraph is missing the "." in every chapter so far?