Review Detail of Novel_Equilizer in Primordial Darkness Heretic Art

Thats kinda harsh

Like I said the whole Idea aand premise of the story is great. But, Grammer and sentence structure is atrocious . Rhe characyer is one-dinensional and portrayed as a battle maniac. the Only thing i know about him is that he loves to fight. The first human interaction is that five people barge into his house. He is a lump of darkness sitting in a corner and then tries to talk to them. Even after several warnings, Four people attack him ‘ out of fear and survival instinct’. Fine. The the last person is a kid who peed his pants. Mc talks to him , Bla bla Bla. Then couple of paragraphs layer the kid refers him as Uncle and throws fear out of the window. Proceeding to the next chapter, MC trains the kid. In the rela life , people dont tlak to Darkness monsters and live with them after a couple of lines . In conclusion, I hope this novel was written by someone else.